Pokémon Chakra पोकेमॉन चक्र - KAVITA RAWAT
ब्लॉग के माध्यम से मेरा प्रयास है कि मैं अपने विचारों, भावनाओं को अपने पारिवारिक दायित्व निर्वहन के साथ-साथ कुछ सामाजिक दायित्व को समझते हुए सरलतम अभिव्यक्ति के माध्यम से लिपिबद्ध करते हुए अधिकाधिक जनमानस के निकट पहुँच सकूँ। इसके लिए आपके सुझाव, आलोचना, समालोचना आदि का स्वागत है। आप जो भी कहना चाहें बेहिचक लिखें, ताकि मैं अपने प्रयास में बेहत्तर कर सकने की दिशा में निरंतर अग्रसर बनी रह सकूँ|

Friday, November 15, 2019

Pokémon Chakra पोकेमॉन चक्र

हम तो ठहरे हिन्दी माध्यम से पढ़े-लिखे, इसलिए हिंदी में ही पढ़ते-लिखते हैं। अंग्रेजी तो अपनी बस काम चलताऊ है, थोड़ा-बहुत समझ आ जाता है। अपने लिए तो  इतना  ही काफी है।  लेकिन अब मेरे आठवीं कक्षा में अंग्रेजी माध्यम से पढ़ने वाले बेटे को भी गीत-संगीत, चित्रकला, मूर्तिकला के साथ-साथ लिखने का भी शौक जागा है।  उसे हमारे मोबाइल पर पोकेमॉन गेम खेलने में बड़ा मजा आता है।  यह गेम उसे इतना पसंद है कि वह पोकेमॉन पकड़ने, उनसे लड़ने के लिए पापा को जाने शहर भर में कहाँ-कहाँ घुमाता-फिराता है। कभी-कभी उसके दो-चार दोस्त भी छुट्टी के दिन आकर साइकिल से अपने-अपने मोबाइल, टैब लेकर उधर-उधर पोकेमॉन ढूढ़ने-पकड़ने निकल पड़ते हैं। घण्टों भटकते-भटकते जब घर आते हैं, तब भी इसी विषय पर उनकी बातें चलती रहती हैं। 
          पिछले सप्ताह जब उसे पोकेमॉन पर लिखने का शौक चर्राया तो कम्प्यूटर पर बैठकर कहानी लिखने बैठ गया।  मुझे आश्चर्य हुआ कि उसने एक सप्ताह में ही कहानी का एक भाग सचित्र बड़ी सरलता से पूरा भी कर लिया। मुझे यह देख बहुत अच्छा लगता कि वह अपनी धुन का इतना पक्का है कि जो काम करने की ठान लेता है उसे पूरा करके ही दम लेता है।  इस दौरान उसे खाने-पीने तक का भी होश नहीं रहता,जिसके लिए मुझे उसे डाँट भी लगानी पड़ती है।  कहानी लिखने का शौक उसका नया-नया है। पिछले माह उसकी टीचर ने जब घर से कोई कहानी लिखकर लाने को कहा तो उसने अपने मन से दस पेज की कहानी लिखकर टीचर को दिखाई तो टीचर ने पढ़कर उसे खूब शाबासी दी और आगे भी लिखते रहने को कहा तो उसका लिखने का सिलसिला चल पड़ा। मेरा बेटा बहुत अच्छा लिखता है, यदि यह बात टीचर ने पैरेंट मीटिंग में नहीं बताई होती तो हमें तो पता ही नहीं चलता।       
         इसी कड़ी में आज मैं मेरे बेटे द्वारा लिखी "पोकेमॉन चक्र" कहानी का पहला भाग प्रस्तुत कर रही हूँ।  मेरे बेटे की यह पहली कहानी है, इसलिए पाठकों से अनुरोध करना चाहूंगी कि बच्चे के प्रोत्साहन के लिए कमेंट बॉक्स में जाकर जरूर लिखें कि कैसे इस कहानी को बच्चों के लिए और अच्छे ढंग से रोचक और आकर्षक बनाया जा सकता है।

...कविता रावत


















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"A pleasant morning of April with fragrance of blooming flowers and beautiful Sun in the sky with all cute Pokémons all around is a perfect day to let children have fun choosing their new Pokémons.", said Mr. Goswami with a sigh of relaxation. "You're right, Mr. Piyush Goswami. After waiting for so long at last the children could have their own Pokémons," replied Prof. Deodar. "Look, there they are!" Many the children gathered in front of the main entrance of Van Vihar Vanya Kshetra.
Prabhav along with Sam and Mani enters. "Where's Danny?" asked Mani, "He was supposed to be here even before us." Prabhav replied, "He must have been late." "That Tingu must have been playing PUBG till late night and had not waked up on time," said Sam with slight anger. "He must be struck in traffic." Mani said in concern. "Yes there's a lot of traffic in the way. That's because some famous people are coming to the lake view.", said Prabhav. As the time passed, more children came and were even more enthusiastic.
Then Mr. Piyush came to stage and announced,
"ATTENSION FUTURE POKÉMON CHAMPS. Welcome to Van Vihar Vanya Kshetra. Today you all will get to catch your very own first second and third Pokémons! I know you all must be very eager to start your very own adventure, don't worry so am I," "Why are you getting exited?" said the Professor. "Well children as you all know who am I," as he said this from back someone shouted," NO OLD MAN, WHO ARE YOU?" Everyone started to laugh.
"Who the hell could he be?" said Prabhav. "Yeah literally, who is that old man?" replied Sam. Mani pushed his head from back gently and said, "You fool he is Prof. Deodar, a well renowned Professor of this region. And also Prabhav was talking about the one who said that from back." "Said what?" said Sam. "That who is the one on the stage with Mr. Piyush." said Pranali coming towards them with a Yanma in hands. "Hey so you came at last. But why are you carrying this Yanma in your hands?" asked Prabhav.
"Actually I found him badly injured at my garden. Some Beedrills were pestering him so I protected him, brought to my home and cured him, as I could not take it to Pokémon Center, and then we both became friends. Therefore, I am going to ask Mr. Piyush that can take Yanma as my First Pokémon." she said. "Well that's a good thing, isn't it Sam...Sam?" Mani said as he turned towards Sam, who adored Pranali. He then said, "Yeah sure." Prabhav twisted his ears and after a howl of agony, he returned to his normal state. Everyone around us giggled.
"Well students it will take ten minutes more for the team to get ready. You all can have a chat with your pals, decide which Pokémons you will catch, make strategies, and many more things till we are ready." said the head of Van Vihar Vanya Kshetra, Mr. Akash Mittal. They all were waiting for Danny to come when Sam shook Prabhav's shoulder and pointed towards a girl and said, "Hey isn't she the Naggin whom we met a few days before? And see her doing it again and..." while he was saying Prabhav hit him from back and Sam lie down on floor.  "Well, you blushed upon seeing her even you knocked me down." he said. Then Prabhav said, "What was that?" "Nothing." said Sam dusting his clothes.               
"He is still not here. I hope that he will come before the event starts." said Mani, in tension. "I hope that he will come soon. Well I need to go to Mr. Piyush to ask about Yanma." said Pranali. "ALL THE BEST!" shouted Sam. She then goes to Mr. Goswami. Ten minutes passed. Danny rushing towards Prabhav and others and said, "Sorry guys that I am late. Did the event started already?" "No," said Sam "How many times I have told you to not to play Pubg till late night. Now you have come so be here only." "Mr. Akash said that they are preparing the zone for us so it will take five more minutes. You came just right in time," said Mani.
"Sorry for making you all wait so much," said Mr. Akash, "however, we are all ready. You first have to verify yourself by your school ID card. After registration, registries will give you pokeballs and a case for keeping your pokeballs. As you catch a Pokémon, you have to keep the pokeball in the case and we will register that Pokémon in your name and will give you details about that Pokémon. After catching three Pokémons, we will give you a message in your respective case. In case, if it is lost or broken you can contact to us by the help of any one around and contacting us. And..."
"Yeah, whatever. Will you start or we have to rot here forever," said the same person who insulted the professor. "Yes sure they are going to start I hope you have do not rot till the time otherwise you will smell very bad and all the Pokémons will faint smelling It." answered Sam. Everyone started to laugh. "He he...well then now you all can go. But do not hurt a Pokémon there and leave. You have to catch it. Wish you all, All the Best," said Mr. Piyush. 
As he announced that, everyone rushed towards the registration center. Sam, Mani, Danny and Prabhav had their registration done and they got a guide booklet as well. "Why didn't he tell us about that before?" said Sam. "That's because someone decided to be rude and interrupted in between," replied Prabhav. "Yeah he must be stupid," said Sam with a giggle. "Let's see where to go...I am going to the lake, will someone accompany me?" said Danny. "Yeah I'll," said Prabhav, "I want to go to the Berry Garden and lake is coming in the way so I'll join you. Will you come with me after exploring the lake?"
"I am going to the Magnetized Land to encounter some electric and steel Pokémons," said Mani."I will also join you. What if I encounter a Zeraora there?" said Sam. "Just shut up. It is impossible to encounter it here," said Mani. "Well then, after that we will meet at the cave. It comes between the pathway of Magnetized Land and Berry garden. I bet we can find some ghost, dark, rock and ground Pokémons there." said Prabhav. "Alright here we go. Bye, we will meet you both at the front of the cave." said Danny. "Bye best of luck." said Mani. Off they go.
Prabhav and Danny reached the lake. "Hmm...Hey see that," exclaimed Danny, "That thing over the rock in the lake. Doesn't it look like a Gibble?" "Huh, where?" said Prabhav looking over the lake. "It is a Gibble. Yay! I wanted one for my first Pokémon. Now I'm going to throw my pokeball on It." said Danny, taking a pokeball out of his pocket and aiming to the Gibble like thing. Prabhav looked in the booklet and then screamed, "Wait!" But alas, he already threw the pokeball to it. The thing, which seemed to be a Gibble, turned out to be a pile of rocks. The ball hit the top of the rock and then fell in the lake. "What?" cried Danny.
He continued crying and said, "I thought I was going to get a Gible as my first Pokémon." "It is impossible to get it between a pond. Also in this reserve there is only one Dratini and 15 to 10 Horseas. Don't worry at least you can catch any one of them." said Prabhav. "Do you think?" said Danny, wiping off his tears. Prabhav replied with a smile," Yes of course. You can." as he was sympathizing him, he saw a flash in the pond. He said," See Danny, the pond just flashed as if any Pokémon was caught under water." As he said that, a Pokémon brought the pokeball of Danny, which fell in the pond.
 Then the Pokémon went to the pond again. "I guess you must have caught any Pokémon because it flashed." said Prabhav. "Let's check out which Pokémon I have caught. Go Pokeball!" said Danny. He threw his pokeball and a Magikarp came. "Seriously, why?" he said. "Don't worry, at least you can train it and evolve into Gyrados." said Prabhav. "Yes you are right, at least one dragon type." Danny replied with a sigh. "But its Water Flying." said Prabhav.
On the other side, as Sam and Mani were going towards the Magnetized Land. As they were going, they found a Tediursa on the way. "Yay, I'll catch it!" said Sam and thrown a pokeball on it and caught it.  "Congratulations, you caught your first Pokémon. Now you have to keep it in the case." said Mani. Sam kept it in his case. Then they move towards the Magnetized Land. There they saw a Shinx. One boy with his all three Pokémons was troubling him. Mani shouted at him," Hey stop it. Why are you fighting with that Pokémon when you already have caught three Pokémons?"
"It's none of your business. Just go away." said the boy. "Hey aren't you the stupid who disturbed between the announcements?" said Sam "So you were the one who said that to Me." he said. "Well I am leaving now but we will meet soon." after saying this he left from there. "Oh no he is severely injured," said Mani. "We need to do something." "We should take it to the healing center." said Sam. "Yeah you are right. Let's hurry. Don't worry Shinx, you'll be okay." said Mani.
He took Shinx it his hand and he rushed with Sam towards healing center. "The nearest one is 100 m away." Sam said. As they were going, they encountered a pack of 4-5 Shinx, 2 Luxios and a Luxray. They all were looking for Shinx. The leader of pack, Luxray, stopped them from going any further. Mani requested them to let them go so that they can heal Shinx. First, the pack refused but then Luxray allowed him to do so. Then they reached to the healing center and Mani handed Shinx to the nurse. Nurse gave it a revival herb.
After sometime Shinx got healthy and they both thanked the nurse. "Now what to do with this little?" asked Mani. "You catch it. After all you found it and brought it here." said the nurse. "Yeah you deserve it." Sam agreed with the nurse. "Really?" he said in surprise, "Well I am not sure, what about you Shinx? Will you come with me?" "Shinx!" Shinx nodded his head in an order to say yes. "Alright then, here goes pokeball." as Mani said that, he threw his pokeball, caught Shinx and registered it as his first Pokémon. Everyone there was happy.
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11 comments:

  1. जी नमस्ते,
    आपकी इस प्रविष्टि् के लिंक की चर्चा कल शनिवार(१६-११ -२०१९ ) को " नये रिश्ते खोजो नये चाचा में नया जोश होगा " (चर्चा अंक- ३५२१) पर भी होगी।

    चर्चा मंच पर पूरी पोस्ट अक्सर नहीं दी जाती है बल्कि आपकी पोस्ट का लिंक या लिंक के साथ पोस्ट का महत्वपूर्ण अंश दिया जाता है।
    जिससे कि पाठक उत्सुकता के साथ आपके ब्लॉग पर आपकी पूरी पोस्ट पढ़ने के लिए जाये।
    आप भी सादर आमंत्रित है
    ….

    अनीता सैनी

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  2. लेखन जगत का नन्हा लेखक।आपके बेटे को बहुत बहुत बधाई एवं शुभकामनाएं💐💐👌👌

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  3. स्नेहाशीष एवं अनंत शुभकामनाएँ

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  4. अर्जित को बधाई व शुभकामनाएँ. अब आप इसका हिंदी अनुवाद करें जिसे यहीं, साथ ही रचनाकार.ऑर्ग में छापेंगे तो और लोगों तक भी पहुँचेगा.

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  5. एक कथाकार के सभी गुण परिलक्षित जान पड़ते हैं। आवश्यकता केवल प्रेरित करने की है। कमियाँ यदि है तो स्वतः ही समाप्त हो जायेगी। अर्जित को ढेर सारी शुभकामनाये।

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  6. कहानी कहने का तरीका अच्छा लगा ... सूत्रधार की तरह शुरुआत है कहानी की ... अच्छी बात है, अच्छी गति दी है कहानी को ... मेरा मानना है अभी तो लिखने देना ही उचित है ... जैसा वो लिखना चाहता है ... उसके बाद जब बच्चे को लिखने में आनद आने लगे तो थोडा थोडा शुरुआत करनी चाहिए ...
    मेरी बहुत बहुत शुभकामनायें हैं ... अच्छा लिख रहा है मेरी तरफ से प्यार ...

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  7. नन्हा लेखक.... शुभकामनायें

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  8. नन्हे अर्जित को बहुत बहुत बधाई और शुभकामनाएं।

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  9. अच्छा लिखा है अर्जित ने, उसे लिखने दीजिए . शुभकामनाएँ .

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